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Requiem Of Beat Poetry by ~BlackTongue:iconBlackTongue:





I knew Ali, like rainbows reflected in gas leaks
I knew Sean, like veterans of a forgotten time
It's the requiem of beat poetry;
It's the requiem of beat poetry;

Ophelia, dear sweet, perpetual ambassador to grief
Spoke in stutter, the tempo of her existence.
It's the requiem of beat poetry;
It's the requiem of beat poetry;

The rhapsody of a dream
The madonna of a disbelief
The dictionary of a malady
- and the requiem of beat poetry

Holden, swimming in thoughts of effigy
Back and forth, to his musical notes
It's the requiem of beat poetry;
It's the requiem of beat poetry;

I knew Chris, a main character in a falsetto cry
I knew him, a mosaic of a man's image
It's the requiem of beat poetry;
It's the requiem of beat poetry;

The rhapsody of a dream
The madonna of a disbelief
The dictionary of a malady
- and the requiem of beat poetry

And if I don't feel enough to rhyme anymore
will you sing a song for the dead?
©2005-2009 ~BlackTongue
:iconblacktongue:

Author's Comments

addressing why, sometimes, the best things in life are painful. why? I don't know.
p.s. i think i am going half insane.

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:iconbrokendowndoll:
There's a couple of lines I really like in this "I knew him, the mosaic of a man's image" and also the last two lines. The reason why I love them will probably boggle your mind.

You see, I don't completely understand what the last two mean, so it forces me to think of all the possibilities, and pick the one that I think best applies. It's like translating Shakespeare into modern day english.
I love this, it's very eloquently written.
:iconblacktongue:
Lol, well I was just trying to tie in the definition of requiem (A catholic song for the dead-but hey aren't you Catholic-so you know) to all the other stuff I wrote- but I won't spoil the magic for you, lol.
tell me why you like those lines. it might boggle my mind but i still want to hear.
:iconbrokendowndoll:
I already said why I like them..lol..its like shakespeare..so many possible meanings.
The best poetry leaves something to the imagination..like this one does (even if it had an intended meaning)
:iconvertraut:
the images you used have particular significance in my life's past few years and brought me nearly to tears.

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